Sunday, June 7, 2009

Don't Be Shy

If you want to live in a diffrent country there are many thing that you should know. However , I am going to talk about one thing. In my opinon the best thing to be a happy person , and you do what ever you like is don't be shy. Because you will never feel alone , you will never be afarid to ask people any thing you want , you can make a new friend , and you will ask any beautiful girl to go out with you. The reuslt that you will feel less of home sick , you will never be bored , you will feel like you are in your home. Finally If you are not a shy person I can sure you that you will never be alone.
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2 comments:

  1. AnonymousJune 10, 2009 at 12:05 PM

    Hi is
    you have topic centence and controlling idea, and you have conculogin sentens. you are on topic, but try next to use transetions word.

    Have a good paragraph

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  2. AnonymousJune 10, 2009 at 12:13 PM

    you,r right about these stuff.

    it is hard living in a different country without being a good person
    thanks buddy

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